Thursday, September 19, 2019

100WC - Week #2 - Brooke


The world spun, then everything stopped and was quiet. But I didn´t stop, I could move my arms and legs I looked around, everybody in the classroom had stopped almost froze with their mouths open and legs and arms in awkward positions.
Suddenly a blast of frozen ice whistled past my ear. I stared, right in front of me was a person that had a gun in one hand and another sort of weapon in the other I guessed that was what made the frozen ice balls that were scattered around the classroom.
The man froze to, ¨Well, well, well I thought I got you¨ he said sounding confused. I stared at him with my mouth right open. Suddenly he blasted the gun, I froze, but out of nowhere a person blocked the gunfire and fell to the ground, and then all I could remember was the man getting arrested.

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