“Then everything stopped and….
And what?” Patrick said tiredly, “one more chapter, oh please.”
“Tomorrow I'll read you
the other chapter, that is enough for tonight.
"Goodnight,” Patricks mum said, as she kissed his forehead.
"Goodnight,” Patricks mum said, as she kissed his forehead.
“ Come on mum! you can't
just leave me hanging like that,”
“ I already am,” she said as
she closes the door.
“ Agh,” Patrick mumbles ,”only
if I could just take one peak of that book.”
Patrick ́s feet slowly
walk towards the wooden cupboard. squeak! the floor made a horrible noise. “Oh
no,” Patrick said as he hears footsteps coming closer and closer to his bedroom
he quickly hops in bed and fakes sleeping. “I guess I should just leave it for
tomorrow,” he thought.
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