Thursday, September 5, 2019

100WC - Sep 19 (10) - BRENDAN

One day I made some guacamole with avocado, tomato and purple onion.  After I went to the museum and I took the guacamole with me and I bought some crackers too. Then I went to the animals section and saw an elephant. I saw lots of bones on the ground because a big bald eagle knocked it down. Then I went to the reception and told the person but he wasn’t there. He was feeding his seahorses. So I tried to build it up by myself it was very hard, I did not finish so I went home.
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