Thursday, November 15, 2018

#10 dillan - killer gorilla

Once upon a time in a lab a man mixed Dino DNA with Gorilla. Bang! A killer gorilla appeared.  Then it was running away after a pretty women wearing a yellow shirt. She ran and ran but the gorilla got her and did not kill her because it fell in love with her shirt.  She took off her shirt and fell onto bricks and ran all the way back to the lab room. To get another shirt and help get the gorilla back under control and in its cage. They found it sulking in a old sewer pipe near a zoo and brought it back to the lab.

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