Tuesday, November 13, 2018

100WC Week #10 - Lucy


One day there was a pretty lady, wearing a yellow dress walking around town talking on her phone. Then people started yelling thing at her like:
“LADY QUICK RUN AWAY!!”
Or
“HEY LADY RUN FOR YOUR LIFE!”
Wondering why they were yelling at her she looked around, and behind her was a huge ugly Gorilla. She started running. She ran around a brick wall but the Gorilla just smashed through the wall.
Soon she jumped in a bus but the Gorilla smashed that. Then animal control came so she stopped and looked behind her the Gorilla was gone!

“AAARRRGGGHHH!!!”
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1 comment:

  1. AnonymousNovember 14, 2018 at 5:06 PM

    hi lucy for one I like the exspetion in it it was good to read

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