Wednesday, November 7, 2018

100WC - Week #9 - Marissa

I wondered what was behind the door I heard someone say.Hi I am Marissa and I am here to tell you what happens behind the door many people I see in town I can hear them saying to people  I wonder what's behind the door they say it's not that bad behind the door to be honest it's really fun there's  food candy and drinks of all sorts like milkshakes and whatever you want

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  1. AnonymousNovember 13, 2018 at 3:28 PM

    HI Marissa
    I really liked the way you kinda put the horror kind of feel


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