Thursday, November 15, 2018

Blake 100WC Week #10


RUN!”
“From what”
“The gorilla”
If you can’t tell yet there's a pretty lady in a yellow dress and yellow high heels running away from a giant gorilla about to be hit by one of those bricks that are flying at her. Oh and that gorilla there, see right there yea it’s a alien that's right an alien I know right. But you can kinda tell by the red eyes and the floating teeth I know what you're thinking isn't it just a robot but NO!!! It’s an alien and now you're probably saying no it’s a robot but guess what it an’t. Now have a nice day and bye.


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