Wednesday, November 14, 2018
Abbie 100wc #10
Once upon a time there was this Gorilla and he loved to build but he especially loved to build with bricks. One day he was building a wall with some bricks for this old lady she wore a spotty yellow shirt and square black glasses. The old lady came outside to check how Mr Gorilla was going he turned and and started running towards the old lady Mr Gorilla thought that she was so pretty.
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