Hi
I am a yellow Gorilla and people say I am pretty. My favorite thing to do is smash bricks and running after old people in yellow because they are more fun to run after.I was born in a very small place it was called a glass box because they thought I would hurt people I would never hurt anyone because that is what my mum told me to do is to never hurt anyone because it is mean.My dream home is to be with my mum in the open jungle.
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