Thursday, November 15, 2018

100WC Week #10 - Keira

¨Okay coming honey!¨Mum replied
¨Okay nice at pretty  lets  goooooooo¨ shouted Molly sarcastically.
They hop in the car and go down there yellow bricks road
Like follow the yellow brick road get it off the wizard of oz?
Okay they drove down to the soccer prize giving the went past the zoo and saw a big Gorilla running
¨Omg list is a crazy day¨ Molly whispered but loud enough to hear
¨what was that honey?¨ Mum shouted
¨Oh nothing just daydreaming¨Molly replied louder this time  In hope she is not deaf


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