In my house there
is a magic door that leads in somewhere.
I look for the door didn't see the door.
I looked again but didn’t it.
Then I saw the door it leads to
the Basement I turned on the light switch. And I slowly walk down the
stairs when I turned the Corner I saw A
purple portal door it was closed. I open the door to the portal and I saw Just purple I put my
Hand Through the purple portal I
couldn’t see my arm when I want in the
portal but when I got in them was a zombie aaa run zombie.
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