Sunday, November 18, 2018
100WC - Week #11 - Olivia
One day there was a boy who was going to the Olympics for cycling. Then again he went out to the woods with his friends and started doing stunts on his bike. His friends told him he would get very hurt and have to go to hospital, but he didn't listen. He kept doing stunts and the next year the commonwealth games came he entered in the cycling event. But three days before the commonwealth games he was doing stunts and crashed into a tree he got sucked into it and died. To this day his bike is still stuck.
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