Wednesday, November 14, 2018

100WC Week #10 - Isabella Dryland

Once upon a time there was a Gorilla and a mad Scientist who was trying to make a formula the turned the gorilla yellow. But it went wrong and the scientist made the wrong formula and it made the gorilla grow and grow and grow it grew so big that the Scientist was running away from it. It was throwing bricks at him but well he was running he saw a pretty girl her name was Lola she was the the most wealthy person in town.
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