Sunday, November 18, 2018

100WC - Week #11 - Hayley

¨Hey Summer look at this bike!¨ Said Hannah.
¨Wow! How do you think it got there?¨
20 years earlier……….
Kate was riding her bike past a tree on the way to school.She then realized she forgot her bag. She hopped off the bike and chained it to the tree.She ran back the way she came and got her bag.When she went to get her bike she realized that she didn't know where her bike was so she just had to let it be. So she just had to walk to school.And off she went.


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