¨ Morning Mom how are you this morning?¨ asked Lily.
¨ Good thanks how are you?¨”replied Lily's Mom.
¨Great I just wonder where jack is?¨ Lily thought as she ran upstairs.
But lily did not know that Jack was at his soccer camp she forgot un-no!!
She ran upstairs and heard loud music coming out of her brothers room.
She shouted ¨ Jack Jack are you in there Ja---ck ¨
Lily´s Mum ran upstairs ¨seat heart her a soccer camp remember?¨
Lily replied ¨oh that is right but I wondered what was behind the door…¨
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