Tuesday, November 13, 2018

100wc week#10 - Leena





One day there was a house and the house was built with bricks and the house had a gorilla so then my Mum thought it was pretty cool but it wasn't it was so so scary and my two brothers liked it as well. I said to mum "I don't want to live in this house again ok."
Ok Mum said but you need to know that the monster is not real we had found out that our dog had turned into a monster not one of us.
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  1. AnonymousNovember 14, 2018 at 5:04 PM

    it wa realy good to read and the detail in it was good as well keep writing

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