Sunday, November 18, 2018

100WC - Week #11 - Keira

¨ Aye mate lets go on our bmx track in the bush outback¨said Lucas.

¨ Sure how bout that¨ repealed Max.

¨  Well move ya butt then lets gooo¨ shouted Lucas

So they go and grab there bmx and head to the track Max did a big jump and turns right into a tree and releases his hands off the bike  Crash! The bmx when right into the tree he fell down and got minor concussion broke 3 of his ribs,left arm,right leg and had to be in a wheelchair for 1 year! The bike stayed there for years and it got rusty  and now it is in a museum!

¨ better luck next time¨ joked Lucas




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