¨ Sure how bout that¨ repealed Max.
¨ Well move ya butt then lets gooo¨ shouted Lucas
So they go and grab there bmx and head to the track Max did a big jump and turns right into a tree and releases his hands off the bike Crash! The bmx when right into the tree he fell down and got minor concussion broke 3 of his ribs,left arm,right leg and had to be in a wheelchair for 1 year! The bike stayed there for years and it got rusty and now it is in a museum!
¨ better luck next time¨ joked Lucas
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