Why do I have to
Because I am your mother and you do what I say
Fine said Ava
As she tidied her room she packed her bag she was going to run away to her grandparents because her mother had been talking to her for weeks like this
That night wants her parents were in bed she grabbed her bag and climbed out of the window and ran down the drive and ran as fast as she could to her grandparents
When she teared up to her grandparents and she climbed through the window into the room ...
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