I walk into the happy purple circus tent and pick a seat.
I was expecting elephants on unicycles painting violins
but instead a fat clown came in and called himself Chuckles.
Suddenly he turned to me and said, “Come here girly.”
I turned to leave but suddenly I am on stage.
He says to the audience that I was going to dive into a tank of lava of the tightrope.
Chuckles uses his magic powers and suddenly I am on the tightrope.
My legs lose balance and I fall into the lava. But it turns out to be red water.
I was expecting elephants on unicycles painting violins
but instead a fat clown came in and called himself Chuckles.
Suddenly he turned to me and said, “Come here girly.”
I turned to leave but suddenly I am on stage.
He says to the audience that I was going to dive into a tank of lava of the tightrope.
Chuckles uses his magic powers and suddenly I am on the tightrope.
My legs lose balance and I fall into the lava. But it turns out to be red water.
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