Sunday, November 17, 2019
100WC-week#11-Emma
Jason was making breakfast for his kids and wife , the two kids were girls and their names were Sam and Hanna , his wife was called Kelly.The two kids would always fight over the smallest things like who is gonna walk the dog or who has done the best at school.Today was no different you see the girls compared to other kids was way of the scale! The girls cousin was here and his name was Timothy when Timothy was asked what he would like for breakfast he said hashbrowns then ̈No¨ he said ̈I like marmite.¨ ¨Please ̈
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