Thursday, November 7, 2019

Genevieve - 100WC - week#9

It was October 31st. Halloween night I was trick or treating with all my friends (only like.. 1 friend) about 1 and a half hours into trick or treating me and my friend came across a house that had a very small walk through haunted house and inside the haunted house was a lot of fake spider webs and mainly stuff to do with spiders there were 5 VERY large animatronic spiders. They were all colored The orange one spoke first “Well Hiya!” I jumped and next thing I knew it was gobbling me up, guess it wasn’t animatronic.

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