Today is Sunday, Max was making his lunch for tomorrow. He looked in the cabinets, “where is the marmite gone?” ask Max
“What about vegemite it's the same as marmite” replied mum
“No,” he said, “I like marmite.”
“Well we can’t go to the shop it will open at 8 o’clock, it’s only 7: 30 am” said mum
7 minutes later: “it’s 8 o’clock mum!” shouted Max
“Ok, countdown is not that far from the house”
“Oh and mum i’ll use my money I have enough money to buy it.” relied Max
“Be careful crossing the road Max!” shouted mum
“Ok!” shouted Max. he went inside looking around when found the right one he started searching he found it he took it and he paid and went back home
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