Thursday, November 7, 2019
100WC - Week #9 - Charlee Gubb
Once upon a time there lived two young boys who loved mischief one day on all hallows eve they egged some old lady's house but on their way home they came across a two orange pumpkins on the other side of the road, and they thought it would be funny to crush them so they waited till all the cars went passed then they ran across the road towards the pumpkins but as they got closer they started to release that one pumpkin was actually black, they turned to each other and said “must be rotten” so they carried on towards them and when they got there they noticed that they were moving, the orange one spoke first.
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