Wednesday, November 13, 2019
100WC Week #10 - Liam
Dear people who are reading, just don't bother reading. It was 1918, when the last year of world war 1 happened. When I took my sniper and started shooting. Heaps of my best pals were dead, but that didn't stop me. I go out start shooting left to right Iḿ afraid but I still shoot people, I just see blood everywhere.Left and right. I go back to the boat it starts sinking, because our enemies are shooting bombs at the boat. I swam to an island and thatś were I am at the moment. THE END
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