As I sit
up, pulling the covers closer and closer to my chest, I feel a sudden need to
gaze out the window. My eyes nearly close but I refuse to shut them and drift
off to bed. If I fall asleep, I know I will miss out on something beautiful.
Minutes go past, but I still wait. As my eyes are slowly shutting, I see
something move in the distance. Beautiful red fur shimmers in the tall green
grass. As I make a movement the foxes eyes glares at my soul then carries on
venturing on in the distance.
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