Sunday, November 24, 2019

100WCWeek #12 - Biankha

Purple elephants crossing by one named Ellie and Eli they looked very happy together Eli proposed to Ellie it was very romantic. I said to mum I don’t want to be here, I would rather be at the violin place picking one out for me it would be much more fun than being here. We finally got to the violin place at the it is so packed. We are at the front of the line and no wonder it is packed they are showing there very rare, cool painted violins. Mum says that I can get one because they are so rare.

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