Sunday, November 17, 2019

100WC - Week #11 - BRENDAN

So what would you like for breakfast Harry. Some toast please, what would you like on your toast, jam or some nutella No he said I like marmite. But we don't have any marmite, then go buy some fine lets go so we got in the car and went I saw the police on the way I said hi to the police and he waved back I was happy. When we reached I went strait to the marmite I was really happy. Yay! I said, now we went to the check out and bought it and went home and had it I was really happy.

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