“What is
that?” said Fred “It looks like a penguin here comes another one”
“you have
disregarded the Halloween spirit so the penguins of Halloween will punish you.”
a
penguin
said.
“Sure” said George
Then a sharp pain rattled the boys
and air piercing screams filled the cavern. The boys didn't know
what hurt more the screams or the
pain. George looked back and saw two identical penguins stuck
in there backs and he screamed
again then Fred saw the same thing and the same pain shot
through them.
The penguins said that is the
power of the Halloween spirit
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