Sunday, November 17, 2019

100WC - Week #11 - Abbie .wheres the Marmite?

‘’Mum wheres the Marmite’’ I whined. 
‘’It should be in the pantry where it always is’’ 
‘’well it’s not’’. Mum then tells me to have Vegemite sweetheart.
But I say ‘’ Vegemite is made out of vegetables’’ 
‘’ who told you that’’ 
‘’Dad did’’ I throw a tantrum, but she tells me that Morrinsville has got a Marmite blow out!!
“Well w, w, what am I supposed to eat’’ I cried 
“Vegemite’’ she yells 
“No!’’ I yell back “ I just wont have breakfast then I”ll starve.’’

But I have breakfast anyway with a little dot of gross Vegemite on my toast.

1 comment:

  1. hi Abbie I really like that you put the blow out in your story

    Charli

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