Hi I am Rosie. I live in Redville. So I will tell you about yesterday. So yesterday was meant to be the worst day of my Life. We Had a maths test. but It wasn’t the worst day of my life was quite fun it all started at school.
“Good morning class” Mr Redenie said “today we have a new student his name is Brodey his twin sister will be coming to school next year.”
And this boy became my friend that day and I was quite happy. And that Day for some reason my hair turned Purple.
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