Monday, November 11, 2019

100WC Week #10 - Olivia Richards

Red is the color of poppies remembering the fallen soldiers .
Red is the color of the first color of the rainbow. 
Red is what you think about when you were angry.
Red is the color of blood rich red blood.
Red is the color of cherries that you have on Christmas.
Red is the color of rose in a garden, beautiful perfume .
Red is the color of tomatoes rich yummy tomatoes. 
Red is the color of lipstick, bright red lipstick.
Red is the color of chili hot on your tongue. 

Red is a beautiful  color ...
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2 comments:

  1. UnknownNovember 11, 2019 at 1:32 PM

    I really liked your poem because not a lot of people do poems and you put a lot of thinking into it.

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  2. AnonymousNovember 14, 2019 at 3:32 AM

    Hi Olivia,
    I think your poem was very interesting and different as most people don't do poems
    From Oliwia
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