Thursday, February 14, 2019
100 WC- week#20- Biankha
Yesterday it was my birthday and I got a guitar but it was completely out of tune. Mum got an app on her phone that tells you if its out of tune so we got my guitar in tune, and I was walking around the house making my own song up and just strumming the my guitar mum said ¨Biankha stop! It sounds so bad¨ . The next day mum signed me up for guitar lessons and by a month I knew everything about my guitar. So i was walking around playing a song and Mum said ¨ Biankha that sounds amazing, ẃell done.¨
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