One day she decided to go exploring around the beautiful town that she lived by. She started walking with her little paws moving swiftly across the concrete, she was going slow but managed to get to a road. She was quite tired by then so she stopped in the middle of the road! “Dear me, what’s that coming down the road,” said Sugar. Woosh the car went right over Sugar. So she was perfectly safe! “Wow I didn’t except that! “shouted Sugar.
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