Thursday, February 28, 2019
100WC - Week #22 - Biankha
In this little house there were some little creatures and they were making some lovely bug dip so first you put in the bugs of your chose and then you put in the special ingredient witch is some lovely green grass from the garden now to put in the main ingredient black or white vinegar so you put it all in the a bowl and mix until it is fluffy you have it with a piece of leave and then you eat it I was walking past and the asked if i wanted some i said I will try a little bit so i tried some and the vinegar was too sharp.
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Hi Biankha
ReplyDeleteWhat an unusual setting for your story to happen. It was unexpected when I discovered that the bugs were doing something so ordinary as to making a dip with vinegar!
Miss T Team 100wc