“Come on Caitlyn we need to go now” Yelled Dad
“It is low tide and we are going to miss out on the pipes said Dad . lets go 10 minutes later. “I think there is about 200 in there” Yelled Dad excitedly . “Be quiet dad, I said you are yelling. “oh sorry .” “Cook them up” says dad “ok” I say. “Now it’s time to eat them my favourite part, but first we need to put the in vinegar ok” “yuck” “what” “The vinegar was to sharp” I yelled . “What no it’s not, yes it is you have different taste buds.
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