Monday, February 18, 2019

100WC - Week #21 - Laine

This bear has been knocked out cause the owner did not hold it properly so then it fell on the ground. Then someone came along and picked it up and punched it so it was knocked out cold. Someone threw it on the footpath so it gets stepped on by heaps of people so now it is dead. So that was its life it is the owners fault but now the owner of that one will probably need to get a new one i hope that teddy goes to heave and gets blessed by God.


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