Monday, February 18, 2019

100WC - Week #21 - Abby

Teddy had been at the playground and then a storm hit. The little girl had forgot Teddy and ran away home. Sally who was the little girl had been crying for two days and she had been looking for Teddy. She has been so sad that she wants to buy another one to make her happy again. Teddy who had been struck had somehow come alive. He then walked over to Sally’s house. Then Teddy saw her cuddling with another one. It looked like him!!!!! But when she was asleep Teddy snuck in and layed by the other Teddy. Goodnight

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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousFebruary 21, 2019 at 12:01 PM

    Abby this is amazing!

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 21, 2019 at 12:06 PM

    wow that was sad but I really liked the ending

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