Saturday, February 9, 2019

100WC Week #19 - Genevieve

There was once a girl named Lilly with a brother name Mike, Mike was a prankster. One day Lilly went to get her haircut because she wanted a fringe, when she came back she went to her room and not long after Mike bursted into her room and threw eggs on her and squirted black ink all over her room. He got it washed up but he was still very pleased with himself. But Lilly go get her hair fixed up but Mike decided to strike again while Lilly was in the hairdressers, the lights started flickering and he striked…...

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