¨Ohh nooo the bear that controls the universe has been dropped onto some human planet." groaned Teal.
¨Sell it's gone now you will have to get it back in the next rainstorm¨ replied Tutu.
¨Let's go then.¨ sobbed Teal.
"Ooh mummy look a bear it looks hurt we need to look after it¨ said Lilly. ¨Ooh what are these buttons for.I wanna press the cloud button.Ooh it's cloudy mummy.¨said Lilly.¨What is this storm button for?OMG its raining.¨ screamed Lilly.
¨Now Tutu go.AHHHHHHHH ¨Screamed the two racing down to earth.¨Get out the robot hand!¨yelled Teal¨ Got it yes!!.¨¨waaaaaa¨cried Lilly.
¨Sell it's gone now you will have to get it back in the next rainstorm¨ replied Tutu.
¨Let's go then.¨ sobbed Teal.
"Ooh mummy look a bear it looks hurt we need to look after it¨ said Lilly. ¨Ooh what are these buttons for.I wanna press the cloud button.Ooh it's cloudy mummy.¨said Lilly.¨What is this storm button for?OMG its raining.¨ screamed Lilly.
¨Now Tutu go.AHHHHHHHH ¨Screamed the two racing down to earth.¨Get out the robot hand!¨yelled Teal¨ Got it yes!!.¨¨waaaaaa¨cried Lilly.
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