Saturday, February 9, 2019

100WC Week #19 - Ruby



¨Hey Lilly do you want to play some music at my house¨said Holly.¨Yeah sure¨ replied Lilly ¨let's go.¨ So he two of them set of to Holly´s house. It took them about 15 minutes to get there.¨Come on up to my room¨ said Holly while pushing her older sister out of the way.¨Hey what was that for?¨Said Holly's older sister grumpily.Holly didn't reply instead she just looked at her sister.¨Hurry up Holly¨shouted Lilly. ¨Coming!¨ replied Holly.As Lilly and Holly were listening to music there came this very loud bit  it was completely out of tune.¨Ouch that hurt my ears¨said Lilly.¨Mine to¨replied Holly.


3 comments:

  1. the 2nd sentnce i did not get but other than that i love love loved it Wuby.

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  2. hi ruby I dont really know what this means he two of them set of to hollys house i love your story from caitlyn

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