Wednesday, February 27, 2019

Week#22 - 100WC - Genevieve

I was walking home from the shop, bag of chips in hand I only wanted to start eating them at home. it was a bag of salt and vinegar chips, my favorite! a few minutes later I got home. I sat down on the couch, turned on the TV and started eating the chips, yuck! the vinegar was too sharp! There’s barely any salt on them.

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