Wednesday, February 20, 2019

100wc- week #21 - Caitlyn

Once upon a time  Jenny and Betty were walking with their  Mum to go to the shops. Her Mum had a appointment for a job so Jenny had to wait outside with her big sister.  After a while Jenny was bored so she sat down and played with her teddy.  Her Mum came back down and said that she got the job so they went across the road and had some lunch and then went back home but when they got home Jenny realised that she had left her teddy behind so they had to drive all the way back and then grab the teddy what a mission.


By -

No comments:

Post a Comment

I really liked . . . because . . .
I really liked the way you . . .
I enjoyed reading this because . . .
It was especially good when you . . . because . . .

I think you need to . . . because . . .
Next time you write . . .
Think about adding . . .
Have you thought about . . .
To improve your . . . try . . .
Perhaps you could . . .

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)
  • 100WC - Week #26 - Kate
    I was in Sydney on my yearly visit.  When the sun went down. I was trying to feel my way back to my apartment.  When something pulled me bac...
  • 100WC - Week #19 - William
    Me, my brother and my parents were driving back into our hometown ‘Morrinsville’ from coming back from the airport after having a holiday in...
  • 100WC Week #3 - Lachlan P
    Once  I was riding my yellow bicycle and popping wheelies then I fell off then desperately I got back on my bike and greedily go to the dair...