“Vinegar, vinegar, vinegar we
need more vinegar yelled!” Jack.
“No we don’t, who want that
much vinegar.I would have drunk a whole bottle of water if you put that much
on,”said Betty.These chips have got to be yum, the vinegar will spice it up,
said, Jack.
Oh! I know how about adding
some salt on then they would taste better, exclaimed Betty.
Yes I guess so, they might,
ok then let’s try it! whooped,Jack.
Betty sprinkled some salt over
the chips “perfect”said Betty.
Now that they have got
vinegar and salt, lets try them! Shouted, Jack.
Betty took the biggest chip, and bit right into it but the vinegar was too sharp!
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