Saturday, February 23, 2019
100WC - Week #21 - Issy
“Billie where is my teddy?” Steph asked, but there was no reply so I walked into Billies room,”Bo!” I say but still no reply then I saw my teddy on the ground of his room and him next to it, I run down stairs to the phone and call an ambulance then I call mum and she said stay calm so I did. I went back upstairs and then I heard the ambulance siren so I went out to them and told them where he was then Mum got home so I ran to her and then he came out with the paramedics.
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