“Mummy” murmurs Sally where are we going today?
"We are going to the mall" replies mum,
"Okay" answers Sally
"Make sure teddy is in your bag tightly while we cross the road," but as Sally and mum walk across the road teddy falls out and hits the ground without Sally noticing. A Sally and mum sit down at the mall with their chocolate ice cream Sally wanted to play with teddy so she gets her bag and realises teddy is not there. "No" Sally starts to cry "where's Teddy" she screams. Mum has a good idea.
"We should retrace our steps so we can find teddy." So they retraced there steps until they found teddy!
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