Jack secretly loved music but he didn’t tell ANYONE because
he would get bullied because of it. He had an idea, the school was going on a
trip to a music show, Jack wanted to run up, steal a guitar from backstage and
play it. Days pass, Jack is on the bus sitting next to his best friend, Mike.
He told Mike about his plan when they got there because he trusted him. Time
passes and Jack is running to the stage guitar in hand, He starts playing and
playing RATS! it was completely out of tune he looked at the crowd to see
Mike laughing, Mike had pranked him but this time he went too far.
Thursday, February 14, 2019
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cool
ReplyDeleteGood job Gen
ReplyDeletewow mike is so mean
ReplyDeleteand i really like your writing
good job genevieve well down
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