Saturday, February 9, 2019

100WC - Week #19 - Abbie

Tilly has a fringe her brother tipped black paint on her she washed it off then she went into her room and he was flickering the lights and chucked eggs on her she washed that out to. she was not happy so she did what he did to her but she put black paint everywhere in his room and all on him to then she chucked eggs on him and she flicked the lights and scared him so they both got revenge.

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