Saturday, February 9, 2019

100WC Week #19 - Caitlyn


Hi Kate do you have any washing powder ?.oh yeah sure I will go get it for you.

 WHAT WAS that oh that was my lights flickering and I guess the house went black yes it did and I am scared of the dark so I jumped up in the air  and my fringe flung up in my face anyway thank you kate I will go wash my washing and I hope it will be washed by the end of the day and when it is I will  come and have a wine with you and a pool party and crack some eggs ahhhhh what was that the lights again ok bye .


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  1. AnonymousFebruary 14, 2019 at 1:55 PM

    Hi Caitlyn Emma here I liked your story but I did not get the end part very well.

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