Thursday, February 28, 2019

100WC- Week#22-Kerrin


When I eat salt and vinegar chips. I ate three chips at a time, when i’m eating I taste the vinegar so I said ‘the vinegar was too sharp’  
So I tell my mum the vinegar was too sour. My mum give me ready salt chips because I like ready salt chips , chicken and sour cream & chives flavors,  I only taste the salt a little bit, because if they put too much salt, then the chips will be salty ‘sigh’ Chicken flavor my favourite because it sort of taste like chicken. Sour cream & chives my 2nd favourite flavor I can taste a bit of sour and cream but I can taste the chives, I like the pringle sour cream & chives flavor. 



1 comment:


  1. Hi Kerrin,
    I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
    Your story made me hungry. My favourite flavour is definitely the Pringle's Sour Cream and Chives Flavour! Yumm!
    Good work this week.

    Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)
    Cork.
    Ireland

    https://mrsboycesclass.100wc.net/

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