“Sans you lazy bones!” shouted Papyrus.
“What is it papyrus?” said Sans.
“We are moving to the new house” replied Papyrus
“Oh... okay papy well are we gonna lived the new house near at Toriel and Frisk's house?” questioned Sans confusedly
“Oh yes sans we are going to the new house” answered Papyrus.
“So what are we gonna do?” asked Sans
“Don't worry lazy bones lets pack our stuff and we are good to go!” said Papyrus. Later when sans and Papyrus packed their stuff and when they reached to their new house Sans said furiously, “Empty. What a surprise!”
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